It's almost a secret, I say. Almost a secret.
As we cruise down the interstate towards the Denver skyline, it shimmers, yet settles with a different vibe than the luminous night life. It looks content and beautiful. Colors of orange, white, and purple blend together in the city lights, contrasting against the dark morning sky.
We venture towards a distant destination in these meek hours of the day, and I appreciate the glowing headlights of the few on the road with us. The truckers with their travels of solitude and the early commuters alike. They are the secret holders and the citizens of the pre-dawn realm. A secret world held by them, the insomniacs, early risers, the graveyard shift workers, and the Alpha alike. And every now and then, I find the excuse to join them.
How poetic. :)
ReplyDelete*its, *witness, *its, *insomniacs.
ReplyDeleteAlso, do you mean "wee" hours of the morning? I ask this because "meek" does not make any sense in this context.
Thank you for your corrections, I'll edit those. Wrote this at 4am, it was bound to happen! But no, I think I'll want meek; writer's choice :)
Delete"Writer's choice" doesn't mean it makes sense, and purposefully misusing a word does not make the piece better, it just makes it seem like you don't know the meaning of "meek"
ReplyDeleteThank you again for your input, but no one said you had to like what I wrote. I'm leaving it. Thank you.
DeleteIts a poetic choice. Don't take the literal meaning; it's figurative.
DeletePoetic and nonsensical are not synonyms. Do as you wish, but it still doesn't make sense, and if you wanted to convey a meaning that actually had meaning, you would consider changing it.
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